The children would like to share some of their narrative stories with you. Having studied the process of bread making, they have written a story about what could happen if the bread making process went horribly wrong. It is difficult to publish all of their work but we hope you enjoy reading a sample.

The Bread Monster
Written by Neve

Early one morning a scientist was doing a bread experiment on how to make bread. He wrote the write things into his book but he had one thing that he had not labelled properly. It would be the potion that would make the bread come alive. He fixed the problem and wrote that down in his book too. He thought that the potion was a bottle of yeast so he put the yeast in with the other ingredients. The scientist stirred it up. The bread was ready.

The bread turned into a bread monster. It chased the scientist all around the laboratory. He ran out of the laboratory and ran into a bread shop. The bread monster had followed him. The scientist was heading straight for the oven. The scientist saw some rope that was dangling off the roof. He got to the oven and quickly climbed up the rope. The bread monster could not stop so it ran right into the oven. The scientist jumped down off the rope and shut the oven door and turned the oven up to 200 degrees Celsius. The bread monster was cooked alive. When he came out of the oven he was as solid as a rock.





Monster on the Rampage

Written by Blake
A monster was on a rampage and every time he stomped his feet, he created an earthquake. He had one eye and a bagel for a shield. He had a bread tail and bread wings. He was quite smelly, really quite rotten.

There was a totally wicked Wednesday when everytime the monster saw the sun, he grew bigger and bigger. He grew so big that he floated off into space, suffocated and died. That made the sky rain loaves of bread.




The Bread Monster

Early one morning the bakers were making a new type of bread. Suddenly the oven started to rumble. It was like a 6.9 earthquake, except in the oven. This tiny bread man jumped out of the oven and slipped out of the bakery.

The sun came out and then the little bread man started to grow. No more than a few minutes later, the bread man was a giant!

He went into the city and went on a rampage. The bakers screamed, “Oh no! That’s not good. That’s where the professor lives.” The bakers ran after him and into the professor’s laboratory. They said,” professor there’s a bread monster on the loose.”
“Oh no!” the professor said. Robert, Jake and James ran in.

“We have a solution,” they yelled. They brought a giant toaster into the room. “Meet the giant toaster 2000,” they said. They all took it outside and lured the bread monster closer. Once he was inside of it, they pushed the lever down and then popped him off into space. No-one knew what might happen next but the professor was delighted with the result.

Written by Robert